2013년 1월 15일 화요일

Adora Svitak

Hello, my name is Sherry. And I'm here today to talk about my opinion with 'ADORA SVITAK'. In fact, I didn't know that there is a person whose name is Adora Svitak. Anyway, let's start. She says that childrens must be treated like adults and I'm agree with her opinion. I have 2 reasons why I think so. First, there are a lot of things which adults have to learn from childrens. For an example, there is some ways that child can think more deaply. They know how to distinguish the thing which they have to do or they don't have to do. In fact, there are less adults than child who can make their leggo which is same as blocks. Second, childrens can be more brilliant than adults.  It's because while adults were grown up, they know that which thing we can do and which thing we can't do. And then they try to do just possible things. But for childs, they didn't know at all because they're not as much as grown up to distinguish it so sometimes they can be more creative or brilliant. These were the reasons why I agree with Adora Svitak's opinion which adults have to behave their childs as if they were an adults.

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  1. Please take more care when writing. Check and fix the simple mistakes that you find. This is easy to do and doesn't take much time.

    Please follow the essay format that was explained in class and is posted on my blog.

    You really have only one idea, but you state it twice. It's okay to have only one good idea, but you have to take the time to explain it.

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